Episode 42
Erstellt: 23.11.2008
Letzte Änderung: 23.11.2008
Letzte Änderung: 23.11.2008
abgeschlossen
Englisch
446 Wörter, 1 Kapitel
446 Wörter, 1 Kapitel
Genre: Gen
soo, hier dann die zweite Folge von mir :D
Kapitel | Datum | Andere Formate | Daten |
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Kapitel 1 Sick ? | E: 23.11.2008 U: 23.11.2008 |
Kommentare (3) 445 Wörter nicht abgeschlossen (50%) |
Blue Flame
Von: JoanaFlies Serie: weiblicher Charakter, Artist Trading Cards (ATC), Roswell Conspiracies: Aliens, Myths and Legends Stil: Alkoholmarker, Buntstifte Power
Von: JoanaFlies Serie: Artist Trading Cards (ATC), Roswell Conspiracies: Aliens, Myths and Legends Stil: Alkoholmarker, Buntstifte Ending A War
Von: JoanaFlies Serie: weiblicher Charakter, Roswell Conspiracies: Aliens, Myths and Legends, Militär Stil: Alkoholmarker, Buntstifte # 703 / 704 ~ Kiss Me
Von: JoanaFlies Serie: Artist Trading Cards (ATC), Roswell Conspiracies: Aliens, Myths and Legends Stil: Alkoholmarker # 678/679 ~ Foolish Human, you're done !
Von: JoanaFlies Serie: Artist Trading Cards (ATC), Roswell Conspiracies: Aliens, Myths and Legends Stil: Alkoholmarker, Buntstifte # 621 ~ Young Sh'lainn
Von: JoanaFlies Serie: weiblicher Charakter, Artist Trading Cards (ATC), Roswell Conspiracies: Aliens, Myths and Legends Stil: Alkoholmarker, Buntstifte # 616 ~ Celtic Dressin'
Von: JoanaFlies Serie: Artist Trading Cards (ATC), Roswell Conspiracies: Aliens, Myths and Legends Stil: Alkoholmarker, Aquarell This = Love
Von: JoanaFlies Serie: Gefühle, Roswell Conspiracies: Aliens, Myths and Legends Stil: Alkoholmarker, Buntstifte # 582 ~ One Last Kiss..
Von: JoanaFlies Serie: Artist Trading Cards (ATC), Roswell Conspiracies: Aliens, Myths and Legends Stil: Alkoholmarker, Buntstifte Beltaine Bath
Von: JoanaFlies Serie: weiblicher Charakter, Roswell Conspiracies: Aliens, Myths and Legends Stil: Alkoholmarker, Buntstifte # 551 ~ How It Could Have Been
Von: JoanaFlies Serie: Artist Trading Cards (ATC), Roswell Conspiracies: Aliens, Myths and Legends Stil: Alkoholmarker, Buntstifte Queen
Von: JoanaFlies Serie: Roswell Conspiracies: Aliens, Myths and Legends Stil: Alkoholmarker # 550 ~ Unborn Queen
Von: JoanaFlies Serie: Artist Trading Cards (ATC), Roswell Conspiracies: Aliens, Myths and Legends Stil: Alkoholmarker # 547 ~ The Queen
Von: JoanaFlies Serie: Artist Trading Cards (ATC), Roswell Conspiracies: Aliens, Myths and Legends Stil: Alkoholmarker, Buntstifte # 338 ~ Endlich frei
Von: JoanaFlies Serie: Artist Trading Cards (ATC), Roswell Conspiracies: Aliens, Myths and Legends Stil: Alkoholmarker, Buntstifte # 326 ~ Fliegende Fische
Von: JoanaFlies Serie: männlicher Charakter, Artist Trading Cards (ATC), Roswell Conspiracies: Aliens, Myths and Legends Stil: Alkoholmarker # 227~ Young Agents
Von: JoanaFlies Serie: Artist Trading Cards (ATC), Roswell Conspiracies: Aliens, Myths and Legends Stil: Alkoholmarker, Aquarell # 214 ~ Do you think we're ready for this? - Oooh yes. At least I know I am..
Von: JoanaFlies Serie: Artist Trading Cards (ATC), Gefühle, Roswell Conspiracies: Aliens, Myths and Legends Stil: Alkoholmarker, Buntstifte # 211 ~ Young Love Is Such Dumb Love..
Von: JoanaFlies Serie: Pairing (Hetero), Artist Trading Cards (ATC), Roswell Conspiracies: Aliens, Myths and Legends Stil: Alkoholmarker, Buntstifte # 149 ~ Missing You
Von: JoanaFlies Serie: weiblicher Charakter, Artist Trading Cards (ATC), Roswell Conspiracies: Aliens, Myths and Legends Stil: Alkoholmarker, Buntstifte # 80 ~ Family
Von: JoanaFlies Serie: Artist Trading Cards (ATC), Roswell Conspiracies: Aliens, Myths and Legends, Familie Stil: Alkoholmarker, Buntstifte Family
Von: JoanaFlies Serie: Artist Trading Cards (ATC), Roswell Conspiracies: Aliens, Myths and Legends Stil: Alkoholmarker Hers
Von: JoanaFlies Serie: Artist Trading Cards (ATC), Roswell Conspiracies: Aliens, Myths and Legends Stil: Alkoholmarker Wearing Mummy's Clothes
Von: JoanaFlies Serie: Roswell Conspiracies: Aliens, Myths and Legends Stil: Alkoholmarker, Filzstifte
Wann geht es bei der Geschichte eigentlich weiter? Ich meine, sie ist doch wirklich klasse.
Kommentar zu: Kapitel 1: Sick ?
At first, I wanted to say "It's totally clear, that she is ill, after all, she was soaked with rain in the last episode"... but that is not the clue, isn't it?
would be cool, to know, what the heck is going on.
Nice writing style - I am completely flabbergasted... Ich glaub zumindest, das man "komplett platt" so nennt. ^^
would be cool, to know, what the heck is going on.
Nice writing style - I am completely flabbergasted... Ich glaub zumindest, das man "komplett platt" so nennt. ^^
Kommentar zu: Kapitel 1: Sick ?
> Suddenly her mood seemed to change completely.
At that point of the story, I really thought she was pregnant. XD
You've got an ingenius writing style, creating tension in merely a few lines.
Maybe it would just be helpful to skip a line from time to time- to make it more comfortable to read. ^^
At that point of the story, I really thought she was pregnant. XD
You've got an ingenius writing style, creating tension in merely a few lines.
Maybe it would just be helpful to skip a line from time to time- to make it more comfortable to read. ^^
Kommentar zu: Kapitel 1: Sick ?